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Excerpt *has no name for it yet*
by Yunii 24th October 2010, 2:46 pm
Well i just wrote down an idea that came to my mind and thought i could post it here o3o
it's a piece (not beginning it's something that happeneds in between but it's something that doesn't say that much xD BUT i like it o3o) of a story i'm writing on o3o
http://www.4shared.com/document/R-djhk6B/text.html
you can download it there (gosh i'm sorry for posting it at a download site
)
I really hope someone will read it
and give me some feedback x3
so have fun XD
(these monkeys are epic 8D)
it's a piece (not beginning it's something that happeneds in between but it's something that doesn't say that much xD BUT i like it o3o) of a story i'm writing on o3o
http://www.4shared.com/document/R-djhk6B/text.html
you can download it there (gosh i'm sorry for posting it at a download site
)I really hope someone will read it
and give me some feedback x3 so have fun XD
(these monkeys are epic 8D)
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Re: Excerpt *has no name for it yet*
by BlackLolitarose 24th October 2010, 3:41 pm
It's really great so far!
Keep going for it!
I especially like the strange relationship between Lia and Caleb, and how well you described it. It's all very good. ^^
Keep going for it!
I especially like the strange relationship between Lia and Caleb, and how well you described it. It's all very good. ^^
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